Sunday, August 12, 2012

Odes/Dear Summer

Dear Summer, Hi summer! Summer how I love you. In July or August, Everybody leaves their town and we are going to summer to surf, to swim ,and enjoy the summer vacation. Sometimes, I heel the want of you. Because I can see only 4~5 months of you once a year. I don't like hot but I like you. Because of the Global warming summer dates are getting longer. Indivisually, I like that your dates are getting longer, But Global Warming is not that good news... Anyway, I still like you. It is same vacation execept the season is different, But I think peoople feel they are gaining more liberty. It is nice to see that all families having a good time with their own families. I really love you but often you make me exhausted and sweaty,Because you are have strong sun light. So I wish you could lighten less than before. Spring chances to you,we are all eating watermelon, So that we can stay cool in the heat. Season is changing to fall, So I have to wait until next year. I'll miss you, Summer Sincerely, Julia Kim

1 comment:

  1. Thank you for sharing your ode. On the first line after Dear Summer put a space and then begin your letter on the next line. You should also do this at the end of the letter.

    You should also try to use more desciptive language and add pictures. Good luck!

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